You're great at oral
presentations, adept at one-on-one sales calls. You've even
mastered the dreaded cold call. But when it comes to writing --
putting your thoughts down on paper -- you panic. How should I
start? How can I get all my ideas on one page? How will I write
this so busy people will read it? How do I persuade them to buy
my product?
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As teachers of business writing, we find that whether they're
writing sales letters, proposals, memos or e-mail our course
participants share these concerns. And we use a simple method to
help them solve their writing problems. We teach them to take
their reader's point of view while they plan their documents.
Try it yourself. Before writing, jot down everything your
reader might want to know. If you were meeting in person, what
questions would she ask? If you're writing a marketing letter to
potential clients, what questions will they have about your
product and your company? A memo to your boss requesting a
raise? What will he need to know about your performance and
responsibilities? By putting a face on your reader, you can
organize your thoughts and choose your words with her most
important questions in mind. Writing becomes easier.
By answering your reader's questions, you've handled content
-- what to include. Now your task is to organize your ideas and
present them clearly and concisely. Easier said than done? Not
really. Keep these basic principles of successful business
writing in mind and you'll write documents that really make a
point.
What's Your Bottom Line?
Use the BLUF Principle when organizing your documents: get
the Bottom Line Up Front. Place your main message in the first
paragraph of a sales report, the lead of a letter, the subject
line of a memo or e-mail. This is prime real estate. Don't
squander it with a weak lead or long greeting. "We can show
you how to increase your profits by 20 percent" is more
powerful than "We have a new service we'd like you to know
about." The job of the opening sentence of your sales
letter, memo, or proposal is to hook your readers. Many writers
wait until the end -- the last paragraph of their document -- to
give their big pitch. But without a reason to read on, your
potential customers may never get to the end. Use your lead to
tell them that you can increase profits, then use the rest of
the document to tell them how.
Express, Don't Impress
Your product is cutting edge, the technology complex. But
your writing should be simple. Don't try to impress your reader
with jargon. Keep your sentences clear and direct. Your purpose
isn't to overwhelm your readers with what you know, but rather
to show what you can do for them.
Make Your Writing Reader-Friendly
Your clients are busy people. Their desks are piled high with
letters and reports, their e-mail boxes are crammed with
messages. Is your document easy on the eye? Have you used white
space, bullets, and short paragraphs to chunk information and
make your communication easy to read and navigate? If you are
sending a long proposal, memo or report, have you used headings
to break the text into meaningful segments?
Make sure your communication is enticing. Do your letterhead
and logo present a professional and pleasing image? Can you use
other visuals -- photos, illustrations, sketches, charts -- to
carry part of your message or story?
How You Say It Is As Important As
What You Say
The tone of your writing -- your attitude toward your subject
and your readers -- is as important as the content of your
communication. Don't confuse bureaucratic with businesslike.
Make your writing professional and personal by using pronouns
such as I, we, you. Use the active voice to maintain a direct,
personal tone (I will call you to set up an appointment) rather
than the passive voice (You will be contacted).
Spell It Write
Spelling and grammar errors give potential customers reason
to question your competence. Does your inattention to spelling
reflect your company's inattention to its customers?
A spellchecker is the first line of defense. But it won't
flag correctly spelled words used incorrectly (right, write).
Find a friend, colleague or employee who's a spelling and
grammar champ, and ask him to read important documents. Or make
a list of your own spelling demons and check the list before
sending anything. Most important, make sure you spell the name
of your recipient correctly. Nothing's more insulting than a
"personal" letter from someone who didn't bother to
get your name right!