Much
has been written about how to write a sales letter, but more often than
not, those writings never
deal with more than the mechanical aspect of sales letter writing.
There's nothing wrong with having great prose, but when it come to sales
letters - emotion is what really sells.
The
first step to writing powerful sales letters is to know as much
about who will read your letter as you can. Ask questions like:
What
is most important to my prospect in this area?
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- What
problem will this product or service solve for them?
- What
will happen to them if they don't solve their problem?
Once
you have a very clear idea of what things you can use to motivate your
audience emotionally, set out to design your sales letter. If you need
more information, ask for it. Ask the person for whom you are writing,
or ask yourself if the sales letter is for something you am selling.
Write
out a list of the most important emotional reasons
why a person would buy what you are selling. On that list, find the
most powerful emotional reason. Remember we are not talking about logical
reasons here. All we really
care about at this point is what really moves people emotionally.
So
for instance, you might have reasons such as: loss of income, loss of
health, fear of failure, etc. These things are purely emotional in
nature and have the effect of dynamite in terms of their sales power.
From
that single most powerful emotional reason, begin your sales letter by
creating a powerful, attention-grabbing headline. Use bold type across
the top of the page for this part so that, if nothing else, at least the
headline is seen by your prospects.
Since
more than 85% of the power of any sales letter is in the headline, make
sure, first, that you use one. And second, make sure it is a moving,
emotional statement. You might look at these powerful examples:
Deserve"
"Your
Health May Depend on the Information in This Letter"
"Add
Years to Your Life with Newly Discovered Super Vitamin"
Just
under the headline, use what is known as a sub-headline. This is
a short phrase that further acts as a hook to bring the reader into the
letter. The headline catches their attention and the sub-headline
"sets the hook," so to speak.
So
where does the sub-headline come from? It's usually another emotional
reason, or it can also be a supporting benefit to the main headline.
Let's take the Super Vitamin headline we just looked at. A great
sub-headline might be:
Notice
how we are appealing to a person's emotions rather then their logic. We
did not talk about anything about what is in these miracle vitamins; we
simply spoke about the benefits these vitamins give to your life.
Now
you are ready to begin writing your sales letter. Put yourself in the
position of the reader when you write. Look carefully at your headline
and your sub-headline. Ask yourself:
- What
is the reader thinking right at this point?
- What
questions might they be asking?
- What
fears might they have?
- What
might be pushing them away at this point?
When
you begin your letter by asking questions, the text just flows because
it really is nothing more than answering those questions with
benefit-laden sentences and paragraphs. You may even want to ask the
questions out loud in the letter and then answer them. This is a great
way to lead the reader down your train of thought.
But
you can't write an emotional sales letter unless you are in the same
place emotionally as your reader! If you want to talk to your reader
in a tone and language that they will respond to, you have to put
yourself in their head as you write!
One
effective means is to first stand up and picture yourself as one of the
people getting this sales letter about whatever product or service it is
you are writing about. Think about how it would feel to be living with a
limited income for example. How would that affect the way you make a
buying decision?
Picture
yourself living in a crowded apartment, or maybe as a person who sees
ten sales letters every day. How can you make your sales letter stand
out? What can you say that will really capture attention, address all
the readers' fears, and make them feel good emotionally?
When
you have answered all the questions that you can come up with, sit down
and quickly take some notes. Write out all the questions that you need
to answer in your sales letter. Also write down all the possible
fears and objections your offer might face. The goal is to answer
each and every one of them in the letter.
How
long should your sales letter be? Our
feeling is, and has always been, as long as it takes to tell your story.
You will not lose your reader's attention if your writing is
conversational, upbeat and provides answers to the questions they might
be asking. This is the only way your sales letters will be read by the
largest number of people possible.
The
last part is to make sure you use a "PS:" at the end of your
letter. You can use this space to make the reader a special offer or to
reiterate an offer you already made in the letter itself. Often use this
space to also restate a deadline when the offer will expire.
Believe it or not, this one part of your sales letter is read more often
than the sales letter itself! Use it to your advantage!
So,
remember to use a headline, followed by a sub-headline. Then, before you
begin to write, put yourself in your prospect's shoes. Try to find out
what questions they might be asking. Ask them and answer them in your
letter. Always answer with a benefit that your product or service offers
and that clear answers their question.
Finish
up your letter with a "PS:" and you're all set. Have friends
and associates read your letter. But before you do, pre-frame them to
act as if they were your intended prospect. Now have them read your
letter and give you feedback.
If
this all seems like too much work, it's not! Writing emotionally
moving sales letters making tons of cash and turning
prospects into life-long customers is easier than you think!
About the Author:
Sam Robbins runs
Cashflow Marketing Enterprises at http://www.cashflowmarketing.com .
Contact him at sam@cashflowmarketing.com
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